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Max was a girl like the others ,happy and carefree. She never thought that her life would have changed after the she entered that store .

It was a cold and rainy day and there were few people around, maybe more cats than people .

She entered that store to take shelter from the rain, but also because she was interested in an orange dress that she had seen in the showcase.

When she entered, immediately the shop assistant asked her if she needed something. She answered that she wanted to try on the dress in the show case.

The man seemed very kind, but after a while she noticed that he was very nervous. At some point, she heard a noise coming from the storage room, under the store. At the beginning she downgraded the noise, but then it became stronger, until it became a loud scream. Then the scream became a screech coming from the storage room door .Max immediately tried to run away from the store but the man didn't let her. Max fought with all her strenght but the man was too strong for her. So, after beating her, he leads her too in the storage room.

It was literally terrifying. There were many people hung on the wall with nails and others hanging as dead animals in a butcher shop .

The man handcuffed Max and with a knife slits her throat, leaving her to die in her own blood. Then, he cut her head in order to boil it in a pot. Later, that would have been his scrumptious dinner.

Soon afterwards, the police burst into the store to look for Max. They found her dead body but not her head.

Max was a girl as others, happy an carefree, she never thought that her life would have changed after that she entered in that store .

It was a cold day and rainy there were a few people around, maybe more cats than people .

She entered in that store for shelter from the rain an because she was interested in an orange dress that she have seen in a show case l.

When she entered immediately the shop assistant said "do you need something ?" "Yes can I try that dress in the showcase ?" Yes now I take it ".

The man seemed very kind ,but after a few minutes she noticed that the man was very nervous. At some point she heard a noise came from the storage room under the store. At first/initially she didn't give importance to the noise but then the noise became always more strong until it became a scream and the scream became a screech behind store's room door .Max immediately tried to escape from the store but the man obstructed her and knocked her down; +