The lord of the flies plot

This poem was written by William Golding in ()1952, ( it ) speaks about a group of schoolboys (who) landed (on) a desert island in the pacific ocean after a plane crash during an imaginary nuclear war. When they arrived in the island they realized that there were no adults (alive).



The children tried to give themselves a rational and democratic organization they took a shell as the symbol of their government. Ralf and Jack were the strongest personality (and they) had influence on the rest of the children, and this () made the group divided into two groups. Golding wanted to (give) every child ()a specific personality: Ralf was very diplomatic, Piggy was rational, Simon was very shy and sensitive, Jack was the antagonist irrational impulsive and evil.



All the children a part from Simon thought that in the island there was a monster. So they killed a pig and stacked its head in a stick to protect them from the monster. one night Simon went in the forest and in found out that “the monster” was just the skeleton of a dead pilot. While he come back to tell (his)discover to the others, the group leaded by jack was having a sort of primitive rite and they were completely out of mind, thinking that Simon was the monster they killed him.



After this terrible homicide all the children become more and more savages and irrational(.)all the children a part from Piggy left Ralf’s group to follow Jack , and when Ralf tried to speak with them they killed Piggy with a rock. Ralf escaped from the children that wanted to kill him, fortunately at the end a sailor arrived and saved him.

Golding wanted to express that the evil is inside everyone since we are children and how we can became like savages when there are no rules.



Questo è tutto per farti capire le correzioni: questo () significa che ho dovuto togliete qualcosa

----------------------------------------------------------e le scritte tra parentesi sono le cose che ho aggiunto



Fidati adesso è tutto corretto te l'ho anche suddiviso per rendere piu facile la lettura ^___^





[Sono Mezzo Australiano *-*]



10 pt?? ( ci ho passato mezz'ora >.< ) grazie ;D

correggo solo le frasi errate o migliorabili:



-It's about a group of schoolboys

-because of a plane crash during

-and democratic organization and they took a shell

-the strongest personality,and had influence on the rest of the children,

-this fact made the group split in two.

-Golding wanted to characterize every child



-All the children except Simon thought that in the island there was a monster.

-to protect them from it.

-One night Simon went in the forest and found out that “the monster” was

-While he come back to tell his discover to the others,



savages and irrational all the children except Piggy, who left Ralf’s group to follow Jack ,

in 1952 (davanti all'anno non si mette the)

it speaks about (sennò manca il soggetto)

landed on (non in)

...they arrived on the island (non in the island)

as symbol of their governament (togli the davanti a symbol)

Ralf and Jack were the storngest personalities (plurale)

made the group divided into two groups non è molto bello, usa split the group into two parts.

Golding wanted to characterize (togli la d del passato)

apart (tutto attaccato) puoi anche usare all the children but Simon.

...on the island, non in the island

on a stick

and he (non in) found out...

While he came back...his discovery non is discover

the group, (metti una virgola, inizia una incisiva)

they thought that Simon was the monster...

became, non become

more and more savage (selvaggi, ma è aggettivo, non sostantivo, quindi non prende la s del plurale)

apart from meglio se usi but Piggy

let invece di left

become non became (qui devi usare il presente, non il passato)